In mesapotamia there has been alot of floods. we built leves to prevent the floods to happen but is so hard to keep the water in the river but the rain has stopped today we havent been able to go hunting for about three days i dont under stand why we cant migrate to another place so we dont have to go through all the stress
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I can see you have alot of problems. I'm suggesting for you to build leeves. The leeves will lead to the irragation system. This will help provide water for everyone and crops. The crops will grow and produce more food supply. I hope you use my suggestion.
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You should bulid levees.You should also make a irragation system.When you do this you wil have lots of food to eat and share.This soultion will make you live a better life then the problems.Good luck and i hope you the best luck
ReplyDeleteI agree With Sara and Monica because you should built levees because the floods.You should built irrigation system.
ReplyDeleteGood job with your topic sentence and your concludng sentence.What you should work on is your spelling.You should build levees.You should also make an irrigation system.I agree with what Monica, Lesley, and Sara.Good luck with your paragraph!
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